Chapter 1: Page 15

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curiousdoodler
31st Dec 2016, 7:42 PM

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curiousdoodler
14th Jan 2017, 2:23 PM

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Rebekah
21st Apr 2017, 5:36 PM

Hi! I found your comic from your tweet about it under #fridayreads! :)

I have to say, I like the story so far, but the pacing seems too slow for a comic format, more like the story pacing for a novel. The sets of frames showing characters without dialogue tp express emotion would, I think, have more impact if used more sparingly and probably later on. The first chapter is your reader's introduction to the story world, and while I'm intrigued, I feel more in te dark about what's happening than I'd like to 25 pages in.
That said, I'm bookmarking it and will definitely plan on coming back to read more! I like to read a bunch of pages at once, so I'll be visiting less frequently but it's not due to lack of interest. :) Keep it up!

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curiousdoodler
21st Apr 2017, 8:25 PM

Thank you so much for the constructive feedback! This is a new format for me (I've previously written novels as you can probably guess) so an help I can get is appreciated! Glad to know I've got a spot in your bookmarks :)

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